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	<title>Comments on: My Story</title>
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	<description>Poetry and songs for all those who are searching for life. The secret of life is "beyond these words" for it is found only in Jesus Christ.</description>
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		<title>By: Sharon Goemaere</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sharon Goemaere</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 18:43:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So glad I have found your site Ashley.I am a writer as well and have been blessed by what I have read here.Keep up the good work young lady.:-)And may God continue to inspire your pen.Blessings~Sharon</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So glad I have found your site Ashley.I am a writer as well and have been blessed by what I have read here.Keep up the good work young lady.:-)And may God continue to inspire your pen.Blessings~Sharon</p>
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		<title>By: Ashley</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ashley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Feb 2009 20:09:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mark, I appreciate your poem. I think the thought behind it should motivate each one of us to please our Savior more, to cease doing anything that would bring him pain. However, you may want to polish your writing style a bit. I understand that rhyming can be difficult but reusing &quot;you see&quot;,changing verb tenses and inserting incorrect pronouns can be distracting from the message you are trying to get out. I appreciate your interest in this website and as I said before, I enjoyed the poem. Thankyou for blessing my day! And please understand that I am only writing these comments to help you become a better writer. Believe me , I need the help sometimes too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mark, I appreciate your poem. I think the thought behind it should motivate each one of us to please our Savior more, to cease doing anything that would bring him pain. However, you may want to polish your writing style a bit. I understand that rhyming can be difficult but reusing &#8220;you see&#8221;,changing verb tenses and inserting incorrect pronouns can be distracting from the message you are trying to get out. I appreciate your interest in this website and as I said before, I enjoyed the poem. Thankyou for blessing my day! And please understand that I am only writing these comments to help you become a better writer. Believe me , I need the help sometimes too.</p>
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		<title>By: Mark Mettler</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mark Mettler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Feb 2009 13:56:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>SOLDIER Mark Mettler 91.

I am a Roman soldier, A Roman proud to be.
I ran from home some time ago, a soldier just to be.
I am a Roman soldier, A soldier proud and strong.
I am the Roman soldier who did the Savior wrong.

I held the scourge that whipped his back,
I mocked his name, yes that&#039;s a fact.
I drove the nails into his hands,
I laughed at all his tearful fans.
And at his feet I gambled there,
for the robe that he did wear.

Then as I looked up at his tree, I heard from him this gracious plea.

&quot;MY FATHER, GOD, FORGIVE THEM PLEASE!&quot;

I sat and thought about his words,
&quot;Forgive them please&quot; just how absurd.
I heard those words sound in my mind.
I know those words were God&#039;s Divine.

I am a Roman soldier, A Roman yes you see. I am a Roman Soldier, ashamed, I am, to be.

Each man a Roman Soldier, A Roman yes you see. 
Each man a Roman soldier, A soldier each you be.

You draw the scourge, you drive the nails, You spit and mock you see, 
each day you sin You laugh at him, A soldier you are to HE.

You are a Roman Soldier, A Roman yes you see.
For when you sin against Your Christ, The God of Calvary
You are a Roman soldier, to Christ, Your God and King.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>SOLDIER Mark Mettler 91.</p>
<p>I am a Roman soldier, A Roman proud to be.<br />
I ran from home some time ago, a soldier just to be.<br />
I am a Roman soldier, A soldier proud and strong.<br />
I am the Roman soldier who did the Savior wrong.</p>
<p>I held the scourge that whipped his back,<br />
I mocked his name, yes that&#8217;s a fact.<br />
I drove the nails into his hands,<br />
I laughed at all his tearful fans.<br />
And at his feet I gambled there,<br />
for the robe that he did wear.</p>
<p>Then as I looked up at his tree, I heard from him this gracious plea.</p>
<p>&#8220;MY FATHER, GOD, FORGIVE THEM PLEASE!&#8221;</p>
<p>I sat and thought about his words,<br />
&#8220;Forgive them please&#8221; just how absurd.<br />
I heard those words sound in my mind.<br />
I know those words were God&#8217;s Divine.</p>
<p>I am a Roman soldier, A Roman yes you see. I am a Roman Soldier, ashamed, I am, to be.</p>
<p>Each man a Roman Soldier, A Roman yes you see.<br />
Each man a Roman soldier, A soldier each you be.</p>
<p>You draw the scourge, you drive the nails, You spit and mock you see,<br />
each day you sin You laugh at him, A soldier you are to HE.</p>
<p>You are a Roman Soldier, A Roman yes you see.<br />
For when you sin against Your Christ, The God of Calvary<br />
You are a Roman soldier, to Christ, Your God and King.</p>
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